Pam,
Oooh Missy stole my comment. I, too, just went back to "H" to remind me of some things and found myself caught up in it, reading it all over again--and it was even better the second time around.
I love the dreams and can't wait to see where "I" takes us. Great start and I'm sure that with their altered background--you will move along their relationship beautifully in your rewrite of this ep.
Barb.