Thanks, everyone!
I'm detecting a few themes:
Oooh, a sequel to 'H is for Hubris'!
Yes, I admit it, I wrote a sequel. I consider this out of character for myself, and don't usually do it, but Our Heros were at such an interesting point at the end of "Hubris" that I just couldn't help returning to them, to see where they'd go from there. Of course, the usual rule of sequels applies -- the first story was ~45k, this one is closer to 105k.
I really like reading a rewrite of an episode that makes it all fresh again!
I try, ma'am
The danger with re-writes, I think, is that the new version isn't different enough from the original, leaving the reader with a glazed-over look and a desire to hit the "fast-forward" button
PJ