Hi,

Great part! drool


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“Are you all right, miss?”

Lois closed her eyes for a moment, then accepted his hand. He pulled her up easily, and Lois’s hand tingled where he’d touched her.

He didn’t release her hand until several moments after he should have.

“Are you all right?”

Part of her felt as though nothing could be more right. The rest of her worried that nothing was ever going to be all right again.
Beautiful! drool


More ASAP, please.

MAF hyper


Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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