I loved this story. Short, succinct - able to be read in one sitting.
But that's not really why I loved it. I loved the way Lois' personality really came out, even when she was a little angry at Clark.
She seated herself on the couch.
Clark pivoted to follow her. "Lois, maybe you'd better, ah... sit down."
"Oh, yeah," she commented sardonically. How cliche can you get, Clark? "This is good news."
I also liked this bit:
And it looked like he was about to confess; that would start to make up for some of his more boneheaded moments.
The word 'boneheaded' especially. So Clark. So classic
Well done! I always like reading your stuff, Pam.
I also liked the trailer for this one!
~Anna.
