Oooh! Yay something to read! (I'm trying to not go to bed because I'd have to get up in about an hour *lol* I need to be at the airport at 4:30AM - that's like so insane!)
She wasn’t in love with Dan Scardino.
Thank goodness for that! *lol*
Of course, Lois doing her income taxes would have been sexy to him just then, [...]
Suddenly, he couldn’t seem to remember any of the good things about being Superman.
Oh, shoot! He's got amnesia again... (*giggles*)
[...] he’d helped anonymously for years before he’d become Superman. He could do that again. He would just have to be careful [...]
No, you lunkhead, that's not going to work! Don't you remember that you had to move around from place to place every single time you used your powers, for fear that someone would get suspicious? Imagine now that people have seen Superman in action - they're going to put two and two together pretty damn fast if they see Clark Kent fly around or use heat vision. Duh. How's that going to help you have a life with Lois? You think she's going to want to move around all the time like that? Have you lost your mind??? Silly Kryptonian...
Superman was going to announce his retirement, and Clark Kent and Lois Lane were going to live happily ever after.
Dude... that is so not going to work out. Lois would be floored if Superman retired and either way, how can you possibly even think of not telling her that *you* are (or were) Superman. She's going to freak out when she finds out, for one and secondly it won't take her long to understand you retired the superhero because of her and she's going to have a fit so HUGE it could put Doomsday to shame. (Doomsday, btw, is the mean and nasty Kryptonian being who gave Superman such a beating that the supposedly invulnerable Man of Steel *died* - Lois won't even need to throw a punch to achieve the same, trust me.)
Oh Clark... You really need to get your head examined if you think that plan of yours could ever really work. *sigh*
Great part, Caroline! I'm sorry if all my comments are really directed at Clark... *giggles* He's being a lunkhead is all. But a
really well written lunkhead!
Looking forward to the next part!!