Goody, I get to start the feedback
I don’t know exactly how many parts this will be, but for now I’m going to say less than 10. I also don’t know how frequently I’ll update, but I promise to do my best not to keep you waiting too long. I hope you enjoy the story!
Yep, I "enjoyed" the story!! and I'm holding you to your promise. I want to hear more soon.
he knew just what those boxes would look like, stacked one on top of another in a dusty corner of his father’s barn, while he lived alone and isolated in some secret lair. He hated that word, lair. It conjured visions of wild animals. Of things less than human. He’d never consciously thought of himself that way, yet the word had tripped right off his tongue in his conversation with his parents, and it still seemed to fit the only sort of life he could imagine for himself anymore. Once he put Clark Kent into those boxes, he would be less than human, wouldn’t he?
This was just gut-twisting. Thank goodness you made this section short or I would have needed lots of Kleenex.
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Just the thought of Clark thinking of himself as some sort of wild beast instead of the wonderful person he is was pure torture.
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“I’m not going to run, Lois.” And he wasn’t. No more running. Not when he’d been granted this…this absolute miracle. “I swear to you, I will never run away from you again.”
At first I thought he was going to tell her right then and there. . .
Lois had chosen him! She had chosen Clark Kent, and he wasn’t going to give her any reason to regret her choice. Not then and not ever.
Youv'e done such a great job of conveying Clark's feelings here. I can almost feel the elation radiating off of the written page and into me.
He hated the vest-thingy, he decided, right about the time his fingers got hopelessly stuck. He hoped she wouldn’t notice, or that if she did, she would just ignore it.
Right.
Lois giggled, her lips still pressed to his. It should have been embarrassing, but instead it was just sexy as hell. Of course, Lois doing her income taxes would have been sexy to him just then, but the giggle was enough of a distraction that he broke the kiss long enough to mutter, “What?”
“Having a little trouble there?”
to say the least.
Please don't leave us here to long. I am extreamly currious as to how that press confrence is going to go. Is he going to be able to pull it off without sounding like a Brat(I'm taking my toys and going home) or without having the entire population of Metropolis turn into a lynch mob with the blood of (was it Calvin who brought the law suit) in thier eyes?
More soon PLEASE
