Hi guys! The feedback on this chapter is a little less contraversial thank goodness.
Bakasi--
The idea of Clark being a teacher is really fantastic and I'm a little jealous. We never had teachers like him.
Me either. Dangit. That'd be so wonderful if we did. I'm glad you liked Martha's letter! That was fun to write. I like writing about Clark's parents. Anyway, thanks for starting off the feedback thread and leaving such a nice review.
gr8shadesofelvis-- Hey! Yes it looks like Clark is pretty broken up about Lana. But it has been two years... I think it's about time for him to start moving on. *whistles innocently*
Unnedited on my harddrive!
But to be posted ASAP when I get back.
Lisa-- Hi! Thanks for both this feedback and the one on part 2. Usually being one of "good kids" in school, I remember how I felt when some of my friends fell under the influence of some bad kids. I hate it when that happens too. Glad you're hanging in and reading.
rkn--
I finished Harry the day I got it, lol. I'm writing, I'm writing! Before I leave I'll send off a large chunk to be beta'd and then I'll post as soon as I get back! Thanks for the feedback.
symbolicangel--
I second that! I'm hooked and can't wait for the next part.
Ee! I'm so glad you said that. I thought the beginning went a little slowly so I didn't want to lose any readers. It's a huge relief to tell me you're hooked on it anyway.
And there is some action a little later.
I really liked that Clark is already looking out for Lois--protecting her is in his blood. It won't be long now before sparks start to fly, and in my opinion, when they can't act on it right away it will only heighten the suspence.
Thank you! I agree. I like things that keep them apart for a little bit. It makes the end all the waffier. And I think that no matter WHAT universe it's in, Clark will always be protecting Lois.
I just love his character.
Sheila--
I can totally see Clark being a teacher.
Me too! I'd so love to learn Shakespeare from that man... I figure he'd see teaching as a way to help without the use of his superpowers.
He doesn't seem attracted to her...yet
Keep that ...yet in mind.
I'm so glad you liked it!
Thank you everyone! I feel so inspired to go write more. *scurries off to Microsoft Word*
--Laura
