More feedback! Okay.
cookiesmom-- Ahh, thanks for the sweet review.
And the high school setting is something that most of us can still relate to, even if it's been years . . . or decades . . . since we were in school.
I agree. Plus it's just a fun time of awkwardness and new things.
One thing did seem out of place to me--I think Clark said he'd introduce Lois "real quick" and I think an English teacher would have said "real quickly
Oops!
That was my mistake. I fixed it. Thanks so much for pointing it out!
I really appreciate the feedback. I'm so glad you approve of student-Lois and teacher-Clark. Don't worry, he WILL find out about her. Sometime.
Caroline-- I'm glad you're reading! The next installment will be posted as soon as I get back. Probably Aug. 5 or 6. I'll try and make it longer too. I just sent off a chunk to be beta'd, so hopefully I'll have some backup chapters and thus freak out less.
Anna-- No problem! Yes, holidays do mess things up. I'm supposed to be getting ready for mine right now but really... packing... Lois and Clark fan fiction... packing... you know which one wins my vote.
But I brought my brother's DVD player so I can watch some episodes on the plane! I'm glad you like the story so far! Look for some more action in the next few chapters.
Laura
*edit* Oh, what the heck. I posted chapter 4. All the compliments went to my head.
