I like this part very much. The idea of Clark being a teacher is really fantastic and I'm a little jealous. We never had teachers like him.
I think it's an interesting problem you're dealing with. I like it that Clark is on the side of less popular students who are clever. And I think that his encouragement is the only way to help them get through school happily. I mean, it's really tough when everyone calls you a geek. In the first part I was a bit annoyed that he didn't admonish the girls who were picking on Dana (I think it was her). But the more I think about it - it would have made things only worse. On the one hand Clark understands so much more than a couple of teachers I had in school. But when he tries to save Lois form girls like Jill - I don't know if that's such a good idea.
Martha's letter was great. I can almost see her behind her computer, worriy written all over her face. This is so much like her. Very well done!
Great part, Laura. I enjoyed it very much!
