Hi! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment.
Okay, here goes:
Patrick--
Lois should have used an alias at the school or ignored Kent completely at this point. She could said "Excuse me but I don't know you!" Kent might have given up
I think if she had ignored Clark completely he would have thought something was really wrong. Caveman!Clark coming out and all of that... I can just see him slinging her over his shoulder and marching away from Claude. :p And maybe Clark isn't feeling very platonic when he sees Lois in that dress... hmm... that's probably something for him to stew over when he gets home.
Thanks for starting off the feedback thread and letting me know what you think.
Bakasi-- Hey! I'm glad you like the situation. It's getting pretty sticky. *grimace* trust me, I want to get them out of it too! Lol, but we'll have to see! I think things might have to get worse before they get better... But we'll see/ Thanks for the feedback and reading!
Rkn-- Ee! Happy to oblige! *dodges men with pointy sticks and sighs with relief* *the doorbell rings and Laura goes to curiously answer* *
Thanks for commenting!
Dandello-- Hmm... Maybe he does. Or that something isn't right. But I don't think he's a naturally suspicious person, especially since he has no reason to be in his job as a teacher. He might just chalk it all up to wishful thinking. Or not. Who knows? Thanks for reading.
gr8shadesofelvis-- Yay! I like a Claude being vanquished by Clark. I'm glad to be back!
Tahu-- Aww great! I'm thrilled you're enjoying it so far. Don't worry, I feel bad about last chapter's long wait. Hopefully the next one will be up soon.
Mariadferdez--
Hey! Thanks for the comment!
Claude is older than Clark.
Yup. And I don't think Clark's very happy about the fact.
Lucy still lives with her parents?
Not in canon, but in my story she does. She's a junior in high school and Lois is only 23 years old. Hope that clears that up! Thanks for reviewing.
JD--
Ahh, as soon as their date started, I just knew Clark was going to show up!
Clark's too predictable. ...Or wait, is that me?
I'm glad you like it and are excited about where it all goes! Hopefully you'll enjoy the rest.
Sheila--
I hope you had a safe trip but you should not have taken it at our expense!
Hehe. "Sorry guys, I can't come with you. I need to stay home and write fan fiction so I can be near a computer to post it."
I think she cares what Clark thinks of her.
I think she does too.
Claude is right Lois. Clark is more human than most humans I know. He does care about all of his students but if he would admit it, he cares differently for Lois.
And I think you nailed it! I think the whole rub of this entire scenerio is that he does care differently for Lois. He's not in a full blazing love affair with her but he can see the charge. He cares about her, even as he's suppressing all of his feelings with that super willpower of his. I doubt he's even admitted to himself that he finds her attractive. It's part of what makes Clark, Clark.
I know where everyone is coming from with there skepticism, but I know it's Lois and Clark and that they are the same age and regardless of how they meet they always end up together. I would never however otherwise support this situation.
Ditto. Except for Josie and Sam from Never Been Kissed. I always have a special place for them in my heart. I attempted my first fanfiction ever about them.
It was godawful, but I still love 'em to pieces.
Great story Laura and I am still your #1 fan! Keep it coming and I'll keep giving you feedback. Otherwise I'll send you hate mail!
*scurries to keyboard and studiously avoids man with pointy stick prodding her shoulder*
Thanks Sheila!
Lisa-- Thanks!
Groobie--
But I'm interested in seeing how your vision of the story plays out...you've put your characters into quite a predicament!
Heck yes I have. It's bitten me on the butt a few times already with this particular story!
I love the speculation. I hope you enjoy how it eventually plays out.
Terry--
as long as Clark takes her home first - with Jonathan in the front seat and Lois in the back with Martha - I don't see anything indecent about that. It's certainly more appropriate than the homecoming Claude had planned for her.
And that's exactly how I figured it in my head. Glad you agree.
It's getting better and better, Laura. Keep it up!
Oh, yeah, almost forgot. Claude is a @#$%^&*()&^%!
Thank you! And I agree.
Thank you everybody who reviewed.
--Laura
