Oh wow, I loved the costume Clark bought for Lois, and the one Lois then bought for herself!!! rotflol

And of course... Jimmy with a sheep costume... what a pity he didn't buy it, eh? Has he got a new girlfriend, I wonder? Who could it be? Cat?

Anyway, lovely story. Soooooo funny! And sexy! And well written. I didn't spot even the tiniest mistake or typo.

Hmmm. Short-haired Lois. The author of this fic told us that this Lois has her hair cropped very short. Lois's short hairstyle doesn't seem to have many admirers on these boards, so who would make a point of it in a fic? Tank? Sure, but the general style of the writing doesn't feel like Tank's, does it?

Well, hmmm. The author could be Sue (though she has never given Lois short hair, to my knowledge) or DJ (who has). The A-plot feeling of the fic would go well with Sue or DJ, as well as the quality of the fic. It could be Lara, too....

Hmmm. Wait. Let me get back to Tank. Tank doesn't like Jimmy, right? And here Jimmy makes a fool of himself. Tank??? It is you, then? eek

Ann