I like Next Generation fics! And this one is promising, can’t wait to read more, I’m anxious to know more about the girl who is narrating the story. She sounds too much like Lois don’t you think? lol…
Loved the whole flashback scene, Jon is a sweetheart, just like his father!
I glanced down at my tightly shod foot as it glided smoothly over the sidewalk and landed with a sharp *clack*. The other followed. *Clack-clack*. What was it about a gorgeous pair of shoes that inspires a woman?
Nothing like a good clack-clack to make us feel powerful!
But the combination of night air, an awesome pair of shoes, and the long period of undercover induced inactivity had me on a natural high, and I was anxious to prove myself to someone, even if it was just a couple of petty offenders.
See, this is what I’m talking about! What is it the she does? Or did? I’m dying to know!
Oh no. What happens when I DO actually need him? Given my… extracurricular activities,
What extracurricular activities? Here you go again making me curious!
Unless he tells them. Maybe they have weekly meetings where they discuss people they’ve saved. And they have a list of some sort. A ‘No Save’ list of people who were rude to them, or who committed crimes or something. Crap! I’ve just condemned myself to death through sheer rudeness.
