An interesting beginning
I'm wondering why that particular prologue; it doesn't seem immediately connected to the next scene. Speaking of which, I like that girl's attitude
She's going to be fun to get to know. I'll bet Spaceb--, err, Supernova thinks so, too.
One minor editing goof: the kids new uncle was referred to as Uncle Brad *and* Uncle Mike. I'm assuming there's only one new husband here...
Look forward to seeing more of this.
PJ
