For the record, here's my vote:

My preference would be for Lois to live.

My distant second is to leave the vignette as is.

Ix-nay on a part II dealing with Clark's or anyone else's reaction to Lois's death.

FDK: Very nicely written. I enjoyed reading this. thumbsup thumbsup


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