Aww! Lovely story, Jo! You really took me by surprise in part 1; I thought we were in GGGOH, but then suddenly there was Clark leaning in for a kiss and I realised that things had moved on a
lot! I would have liked to see you write more about that scene post-PML when she appeared at his apartment looking for another kiss, though!
Sweet declarations of love and revelation, and a lovely setting in the cornfields.
But... I'm just not sure about the final bit. Leaving aside Lois's age on her death, I'm just not sure that I want to read about Lois's death at the end of a sweet, WAFFy revelation story.
I don't know whether that's the scene you had in mind for this story all along, or just something you decided to add, but I'd like to see your reasoning for including it.
And we want more from you!!
Wendy
