Wow, Jo, this story was absolutely *beautiful*! And I also *love* that song, so it'll always remind me of this story from now on smile

No matter what others have said, I think the ending was *perfect*, except for her young age, maybe. But I think this has *a lot* of potential, if only you make her die at the age og 99 or something, and Clark is the one staying behind, remembering their song smile Or, of course, make her "die" at the age of 44, and you've got a *perfect* oppertunity to make HG Wells try and get things back to the way they should be.

You're such a great writer that I'm sure you'd have *no* problems whatsoever of trying to come up with a sequel.

But the emotions you managed to capture and let the flow, and how you took advantage of the song... Beautiful! thumbsup Whatever you change before sending this to the archive, keep that! smile

Pelican smile

Such a little thing really, a kiss...most people don't give it a moment's consideration. They kiss on meeting, they kiss on parting, that simple touching of flesh is taken entirely for granted as a basic human right.

Susan Kay