I think I tend to agree with the bulk of opinion thus far. <g> This was a sweet and waffy conclusion to your story, Jo. Had me snuffling into my kleenex most of the way through.
I can't say I have exceptionally strong feelings about the epilogue; I did find it more poignant and sweet having Lara singing the same song that had meant so much to her mother and father, than depressing or maudlin. It did come as a bit of a shock and I definitely wasn't expecting it. Still, that's no reason not to have it, of course. <g>
I'm afraid I didn't even notice the dates (my usual and, in some quarters, well-known aversion to numbers of all kinds kicking in there). But now that others have brought it up, I think I'd much rather see Lois having a long and happy life with Clark than dying prematurely. Of course, if there's a particular reason you wanted her to die young, perhaps you could put that into the story? If it was simply to add to the poignancy of the moment though I don't think it's a necessary addition.
All in all - beautifully done, Jo. Brava!
LabRat
