Yeah, I've gotten a few suggestions to space my posts out a little more.
That would probably help you get more comments

Give people the idea that you won't post more until you have enough feedback on the last part, so if they want more, they'd better say nice things about it...
Also, I'd suggest you consolidate your posts; instead of ten sections you might only need four or five -- I'm an old-timer so I'm conditioned to think that one section = ~20k in ASCII txt format; others say they post anywhere from 5-7 pages at once, and some people post longer than that.
I haven't read this one of yours yet, partly because I didn't want to deal with 10 parts

but I will catch up with it soon, I hope. I'm distracted because of the hurricane coming through here, tomorrow...
PJ