Hi Jaxie,

I'm back, having just read parts 4 - 10. And, no, the ending most definitely did NOT "suck like a straw"! I *liked* the ending. It wrapped everything up, and was full of hope for a new beginning. I thought it was an excellent ending, and I wouldn't change a thing. In fact, the whole story was excellent. thumbsup

I see you've posted the beginning of a new story, so I'm off to read that now. See ya later!

- Vicki wave

"Hold on, my friends, to the Constitution and to the Republic for which it stands. Miracles do not cluster and what has happened once in 6,000 years, may not happen again. Hold on to the Constitution" - Daniel Webster