Hi Jaxie,

I just started reading your story, and I am enjoying it very much. So far, I've read up to Part 3. I concer with what CC said, especially this:

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I love your story telling. I love that it has a comic book element to it, super-powered villian and a lot of Superman.
I second that! This story is a lot of fun to read. Thanks for posting it, as I did not see it on the other boards. I'll come back later, after I've read some more. Just wanted to tell you that so far: thumbsup

- Vicki wave

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