One of the great parts of writing PG-13 is that I don't have to deal with issues like this.
Hmm… Nope, not buying it. I am willing to buy that Lois is too messed up to consider it, though
You guys and gals helped a lot. It was amusing, however, seeing how many people thought that the advice on crystals was related to Clark.
I’d have to go check but did you hint at amnesia? Actually, doesn’t matter because what FoLC would remember Lois having amnesia? That’s something blocked out of the populous’ collective memory to keep us sane
And then you come and twist it and fix it and make this sordid affair into a beautiful Valentine’s story
Your Lois-thinking-last-night-through scene felt really weird. Um, no that’s not right. It’s not weird-weird, it’s Lois trying to think what she ‘knows’ she’s supposed to think while neither her heart nor her body were into it. And this makes Lois feel wrong to me. Which of course is exactly what you want to accomplish here
PS: Are you using a story-structure approach or winging it? Just asking because with a 15-part story last night was the big midpoint twist and all. And of course, Operation Fool Kent the failed attempt during the response-part.
Edit:
PPS:
The thread from FFR on crystal healing
