I also think you did a great job with Star's voice. Her babbling and flashes of psychic insight on the show were always amusing to me and you didn't disappoint here.
It's interesting to see that Lois apparently feels a familiarity with Star. She doesn't know why, but she's comfortable letting Star putter around in her kitchen. As far as I can remember, there was at least one scene of Lois and Star eating ice cream together (the aluminum foil helmet episode, yeah?), so the idea that they got together to chat over tea seems completely plausible. I'm glad that you brought her into the story.
So, if Lois senses a familiarity with Star, but no one else (Clark, Perry, Jimmy, her parents, Superman), then what's the difference? Is it because Star's female? Or is it because Deter didn't know about her and didn't have a chance to prejudice Lois' mind against Star?
Loved, *loved* the discussion between Perry and Superman about Lois' fish.
And Star's response to Lois and Clark's night together and the heat between them was very entertaining.
More soon?
BJ
