Originally posted by VirginiaR:
Sydney wrote: [b] Second Clark?
Second as in unit of time, not in number of Clarks in their lives. Perhaps I should change it to "moment."
Yes, you should change it. That is also why I thought Clark was the 2nd Clark. Or add a "that" so the line reads:
"We do," Martha said. "We've felt that way since the second that Clark came into our lives."
[/b]I will more than likely go with "moment" instead.

Thanks for pointing out a place where there was a little confusion. I appreciate having help in making a stronger story.
