Glad I'm posting after the translation is up. laugh

I just want Clark to stay, and I am not sure he will... I think the only way Lois would leave Didi is if she is ostracized from the tribe somehow, which is what I thought was happening with the untranslated dialogue. I at first thought perhaps something had happened to Didi, making her irrelevant to the tribe. But when she spoke at the end, I knew it couldn't be something as serious as that....

I also hope the marriage is in name only, as a sort of protection, but we'll see...

And I don't see a motivation for Lois to leave with Clark or even just follow him as of yet, which is actually a good thing -- it means you're doing a stellar job laying out the crumbs (we know they like each other and have connected) but not showing us what direction you are going in.

Can't wait for the next part!! hyper


Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way. wink