They won’t be expecting us to leave by helicopter.
Fuentes really is sure of himself.
“Our helicopter isn’t coming,” Fuentes said,
I wonder what caused the guy to back out this time.
“Superman,” Lois whispered in Clark’s ear again.
more touching.
He so should have said "right here".
“It can’t hurt to ask him,” Lois said. “Talk to him and see what he recommends.”
Clark:I already did.
Clark still had his arms wrapped around her waist,
they are connecting. Still this would be even better if he knew she knows.
Lois stood up. “I’ll stay, and Clark will talk to Superman,” she announced. “We’re not exactly on speaking terms at the moment.”
What? Why does she even say that?
What? Her words startled Clark to his feet. “Lois, no!”
Clark:Send her, keep me, I don't want to put her life at risk.
“He didn’t stop this bullet in my shoulder,” Luthor grumbled.
Which actually also shows that Lois's claim that Superman will not let her be harmed is not fully true.
Clark glanced over at Luthor. “If he is able.” And is so inclined.
Arguably, Superman at times does harm. I mean, recently he warmed up a gunman's gun, that created some harm. Preventing all harm seems a pretty high standard.
“I see that you got out of my handcuffs,” Remy said with sneer.
I think that should be "with a sneer".
Clark took a step towards the women, and Remy raised her gun under Lois’s jaw. He took a step back. “What’s the question?” he asked, knowing that no matter at how quick he could be,
I think that should just be "no matter how quick".
“It’s more of a proposal than a question,” Remy responded. “We want Superman to guarantee us safe passage
Safe Passage how far?
