I am loving this story so far--so glad part two and three are already posted
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I guess that's cause you are both guys.
I only saw it as they were both males also when I first read it...
Panic set in immediately. His hair, plastered down against his head and without his glasses, was sure to give the game away. He dropped the luggage in an attempt to stop her but it was too late. He was soon relieved to see that she was more concerned with finding a dry spot on the hem of her jacket to wipe his lenses with, than what he looked like without them. His heart beat wildly as he waited for her to notice. He ran his hands through his hair to ruffle it up, distancing his current look as far as was possible from Superman. He then resolved to just take his chances and he simply stood there waiting.
Almost got caught there! Creative scene to get Clark's blood pressure on the rise...great idea!
Clark nearly jumped in shock. He gulped, turned away from the enticing sight of the woman he loved and then stood, reaching for his towel. As he strode across the room he noticed Lois taking off her robe. When his peripheral vision caught sight of bright blue and a familiar symbol in red and yellow he turned in surprise. She tried to hide what she was wearing by climbing under the covers as quickly as possible, but it was too late, he had seen her.
He turned to her and chuckled. "Lois!" he said, “I can’t believe it! Superman pyjamas?”
Loved how you had her in the Superman pjs, like she was wearing first season...sets up her gift to Clark in a creative way!
Love the concept of the story--getting them to a beach, to a hotel room (together), gift giving, Clark sweating it and on edge is always fun, a bit of romance...Awesome!!! And off to part 2 I go
