Paul,
Completely engrossing.
Ok, I haven't read all the comments, so I'm sure to repeat other ideas.
Lois needs to track Superman's last movements. If he's in the Suit, then he was on a rescue, maybe. Perhaps a search could find out his last whereabouts.
Bobby Bigmouth is an excellent source for information.
The kryptonite? Who had access.
This does sound a bit like Mindy Church. However, hers is a very distinctive voice. Think Clark would have pegged it right away for the overdone Betty Boop that it is.
Hmmm...something a bit out there. Since Lois has just returned from the altworld, maybe she could call on altClark. And extra set of xray eyes couldn't hurt. And Superman is needed.
Last ditch idea, go to the Pier. She can't resist that I know. Get taken hostage, end up tied to a chair right next to his...
This is cool, Paul. Can't wait to see how it unfolds. I especially like the first person pov, not generally a favorite of mine, but it works so well here.
And, as always, I am an admirer of your precise and sharp writing.
CC
