Very cool premise and I am really excited to see how this all progresses. thumbsup

I can't improve on any of the previous suggestions so I'll just hang back for now and enjoy the story.

~Liz

Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.