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From Chapter 9

“Lois?” She felt a light touch on her shoulder. “Bess is calving. Do you want to come?”

Lois lurched to a sitting position. “Bess? Bess is having her baby?”

In the dimness, she saw Clark nod. “Sorry to wake you. I didn’t know if you’d want to come or not.” He gestured to the door. “I called from out there, but I couldn’t wake you.”

“Yes,” Lois said eagerly. “Yes, I want to be there.”

“Put on some warm clothes,” he said as he stood and hurried away.


Thanks for reading!

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Thanks for another great chapter and for posting it so quickly! I think Clark calling Lois “City Girl” is cute. Lois looking for her half brother isn’t what I expected but it’s interesting. I wonder if the mistake Lois made in trusting someone is Lex. I’m glad Lois seems to be enjoying farm life so much. I can’t wait for the next chapter and the birth of Bess’s baby. I love this story a lot! Thanks again for a wonderful story!

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Lois' story with Jack is not what I was expecting, but it's intriguing. Two Jack MacKenzies in a small town? I believe there's someting missing. Maybe he went looking for Sam? confused

I can't get enough of this story. More, please! smile1

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I’m ready for the next chapter, please!

I’m glad to have gotten some of the mysteries clarified a bit, but I have so many more questions! I have no idea if it’s an important detail or not, but I kinda want to know what it is about that book Lois keeps trying to read. Why does it seem so well read? What about the Lana thing? Will Clark ever go ahead and use his powers? How will Martha respond? Is Martha going to recover from her anxiety? Will Bess be ok?

As I said, Next chapter, please!

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Finally, we get a bit more information about what's going on here. It's amazing to see the two so attached to each other even after such a short time. Can't wait for more.


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This was quite the informative chapter. So, Jack is (likely) Lois' half-brother. OK, I totally did *not* see that coming. Cool twist and makes a lot of sense as a "distraction" for her. Also, would not be surprised if something like that happened to Sam. His and Ellen's relationship really is a mess.
Whether Lois' Jack and the farm Jack are the same or not...hmm, that remains to be seen. There is solid arguments why they are not identical but you never know, I assume. Wel, we might find out.
And we also learn some more about er reasons for leaving. So someone betrayed her with stuff for an article/decepted her over a long time and Perry wouldn't print it. Lex? And the one who abused her trust could be Claude? Hrmm...I get a feel like Perry might take her back if she asks though. Seems mor elike she had a number of bad things happen around the same time and she left, and actually wasn't "forced". the whole destruction of her carreer might also be more of an own mental observation (as in she got cheated/decepted on a story) than an actual pulib carreer crash since Perry didn't rpint the article in queestion but that imght hurt as much anyway.
Yeah, lots of interesting stuff to explore here.
Also, there's Lana who may or may not involved in a relationship with Clark...
As for their realizations: It seems as if Clark has fully accepted he has it hard for Lois, while Lois herself, has not come that far yet. Which, admittedly, could be due to her having so many other things to juggle in her mind right now...
Anyway, looking forward to the next one.
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Songbird Thanks for your regular feedback. I've always had a 'what if Lois had a brother?' thought lurking in my brain and this seemed like the fic to explore that situation.

Andreia We'll hear more about Jack. Thanks for leaving feedback.

Scarlet You do have a lot of questions. I can answer one of them - the book. Clark is experimenting with what we now call Regenerative Agriculture, which in one sentence is 'Look After The Soil!' There are heaps of books on the topic now, but I was surprised to find that none of the current well-known authors - Gabe Brown, Joel Salatin, Christine Jones, Allan Savory, Colin Seis - had published anything in the mid 1990s. So, that left 'One Straw Revolution', which is a great little book and well ahead of its time.

Including it in the fic is a little 'extra' for any farmers (particularly ReGen Ag farmers) who might read. No relevance beyond that. And it's probably well-read because there were so few books available at the time!

bakasi In her comments, KathyB noted how, in fanfic, two people can meet and fall in love in a couple of days, and it's completely normal!

Nick Lots of interesting speculation. Re Lois - yes, she had a lot of juggling in her mind, but she has always believed she will leave the farm, even when she wasn't sure what she would do. She leaves = no relationship with Clark.

Thanks to everyone for reading.

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I’m sorry,” Clark said quickly. “I didn’t mean to intrude.”

“Yes,” she said. “I trusted someone. I believed him. I wrote a story based on his claims. But he was lying to me. He was using me to protect his criminal activities.”

Clark longed to touch her. To hold her. To soothe away her distress. “Aw, Lois, I’m so sorry.”

She looked up, facing him directly. “Perry demanded evidence for what I wrote. I told him I had a rock-solid source. I told him that if he didn’t publish, I would leave.”

“Did he publish?”

“No.”

Lex is such a monster. This was probably part of a long-term plan to destroy the Daily Planet using the information from Lois' story which would have brought the paper to its ruin.

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“I think Jack Mackenzie is the result of one of my father’s affairs.”

Urgh! wildguy


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Thanks for your feedback, Morgana. That's about all I can say without giving away too much.

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Once, when the steer kicked, Clark grasped the leg and stopped it from reaching her hand.
Love this detail for the great protective moment, of course, but also love the fact that she has no idea (really) how fast or hard that kick can be, so isn't quite capable of clocking Clark adequately here.

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“We make a good team,” Lois said.
The hottest team in town, you might say. Such a fun little allusion here!

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His reluctance to use the ATV had set him apart from almost every other man she’d known.
Yup. It's so crazy how little things have to be to make a big difference to us.

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Not with her heart, obviously.
But perhaps there was no need for secrecy.
I really love her defense mechanisms, and the way you use them. ...because this is a thin line at best, lol. And she doesn't even realize. Great writing!

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There was a level of control in being the only person who knew something.
This resonates so hard! Also, very much in the mind of a reporter.

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Is there any chance you could fall in love with a simple farmer from Kansas?
Such great individual questions (not one feels like filler), and such a great structure leading up to the last one!

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That sounded like a lead-in to the announcement of her departure. Clark held his breath, waiting for the words that would destroy his flimsy and unrealistic hopes.
“I have a question for you, Farm Boy."
Both cruel and poignant that she uses the appellation that had his fall for her just in the moment he thinks he'll lose her. Great emotional juxtaposition there.

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The sense of loss cast shadows over her words.
Gorgeous phrasing.

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“But not because of Perry. I left because…”
Almost broke my heart there, Corinna!! To think she nearly left because of Perry.

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And Clark would have missed out on falling in love with Lois.
Jeez, that's a stab to the heart!

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She lives in Texas with her third husband.
Yikes. shock That paints such a sad picture. But not every character can be a cycle breaker.

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“You don’t believe him?” Clark asked gently.
“No.” She swallowed down a sob. “My father lies a lot. He also had multiple affairs.”
Such a sad interaction.

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The postmark was Smallville.
...can Clark be right? I feel like this is either a plot on Lois or a mistake on Clark. Smallville is, well, small. It's a common enough name, I suppose, but that would be wild to find another person with the same name (outside of family members). And if there was another person with the same name, surely Clark and Martha would know them. ...is the letter from Wells, lol?

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“Not as rough as finding your family and then discovering they bring nothing but heartache.”
Oh, ouch. Damning and painful.

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She had found Clark, probably the best friend she’d ever had.
Such an emotional line! A stranger she's known for a couple of days gets this title. ...and she thinks thatfarming is lonely??

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Silence settled around them. Silence and peace.
This is such a great taste of what their lives could be!

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And he was sure he always would be.
love

Aw, I just loved this chapter!

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Hi Corrina!
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And his biceps… well, they were out and out spectacular.
Cute Seinfeld reference!

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The caring nature, the gentleness with the animals, the work ethic, the knowledge and capability, the strength of character, the terrific smile, the toned body… it was an enticing combination.
And the whole package can be yours for just 9.95!

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Why wasn’t he married? Did he have a girlfriend? Why hadn’t the local women noticed him right under their noses?
Prefers men.
Monk.
Prospective mother-in-law still alive.

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But they could still call each other.
By landline? /pulls out mobile phone/

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Had he spent any time thinking about her, Lois?
She should stay away from his sketch book.

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Less than a week after deciding she would never again trust another man, Lois was close to trusting Clark Kent.
Danger! Danger!

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Not with her heart, obviously.
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about fifty yards away, eight tall poles reached up from a level patch of ground. “What are they for?” she asked.

Clark looked in the direction she pointed. “That’s a project I started with Dad,” he said.
Are they building a spaceship launch platform?

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“Great idea,” Lois said, conscious of her hand still on his back.
Awww…
CLARK: help

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“We got the poles in and were hoping to get it done before last winter.”
This sorta reminds me of stuck fanfic writing clap

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He smiled at her enthusiasm. “Shade or sunshine?”

“Sunshine,” Lois said, taking off her jacket.
He must be falling in love all over again!
CLARK: sunshine! love

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Is the position at The Daily Planet vacant because you left?
Someone’s perceptive! Also, cute how that’s only the second question after asking about Jack.

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Are you still hurting?

How can I help?

Is there any chance you could fall in love with a simple farmer from Kansas?
Awwwwww

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“I will never forget my time here,” Lois said.
Wanda Detroit, a farm girl in the big city. evil

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“You said there was a vacancy at The Daily Planet.”

“There is. Are you interested?”

“No. But I’m wondering if the vacancy was your position.”

She hesitated, but only for a moment. “Yes. It was.”
There there

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She shrugged. “I made mistakes.”
Poor dear!

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I told him that if he didn’t publish, I would leave.”

“Did he publish?”

“No.”
Aaaand?

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“You left?”

Dark memories churned through her expression. “Yes,” she said. “But not because of Perry. I left because…”
There.

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“Have you spoken to Perry since you left Metropolis?”

“No.”

“Do you think you should?” he asked gently.

“No.”
*sigh*

Also. I wonder if she already looked at the Daily Planet and the front page stating “Reporter Missing!”

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“Jack doesn’t know you?” Clark gasped, as a significant number of his imagined scenarios dissolved.
Going ring shopping in his mind?

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“I guess I owe you an explanation.”
/taps foot/

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“I think Jack Mackenzie is the result of one of my father’s affairs.”
shock not in a million words. This is just like The Wedding Wall, when we discussed someone’s apparent fixation with sheep. Oh, you’re good!

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“I don’t think you’ve got the right Jack Mackenzie.”

“Why not?”

“Jack’s Australian. He comes from a dairy farm in Victoria – a farm he works with his parents.”

There was shock on her face. Perhaps disappointment, too. She gave a cold, grim chuckle. “I got that wrong, too.”
rotflol

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She turned to him then and smiled softly. “And I would have missed out on canning tomatoes and sewing up steers and all sorts of other farm experiences.”
Indeed. And she’s still missing the rolling in the hay experience.

LANA: It’s overrated.
RACHEL: You need to bring a blanket.

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The acrimony was still there, but it was less intense because they only saw each other when they were swapping my sister and me between them like unwanted luggage.”
I know it’s meant to be sad and stuff, but it’s a hilarious image.

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“Yes. Lucy. She’s three years younger than I am. She got away as soon as she could. She lives in Texas with her third husband.”
/tries to do math/
help
I know you mentioned that it’s not following the shows timeline, but even when Lois is 27 by now, that means Lucy got married three times by the time she was 24.

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“My family… we have special skills in making the OK bad and the bad horrendous.”
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“I don’t think so. There’s an agency in Metropolis that helps adopted kids and their birth parents find each other if that’s what they want.”

“Jack was adopted?”
What if Jack isn’t a love child but one of her Dad’s cloning experiments who either didn’t measure up and was brought to a church or was ‘rescued’ by a well-meaning lab tech? Who knows, Jack might be Lois’s fraternal twin, with only one X-chromosome flipped.

Too dark?

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“Not as rough as finding your family and then discovering they bring nothing but heartache.”
“Lois, I’m so sorry.”
Clark was still trying to work out how he could hold her without crowding her when Lois stood and patted his shoulder. “We have a chicken house to fix, don’t we?” She offered her hand to haul him up.
Poor dear! Good at distancing though.

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and not destroyed his friendship with the woman he loved.
laugh adorable!

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The highlight, for Lois anyway, had been when Clark had climbed onto the roof. He’d done it easily, seemingly with little effort, leaving Lois a little breathless.
It’s almost as if gravity only has no tangible hold on him.

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In hindsight, it had been too easy. She should have realised.
No kidnapping. No vat of boiling oil. Must be a false trail.

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Lois walked back to the house, her mind full of the memory of Clark – competent, warm, safe, caring, gentle, strong, understanding.

And a farmer who lived in Kansas.
So, she doesn’t want to lose the friendship of the man she loves?

LOIS: peep

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Clark stared at the columns of numbers before him but not one of them registered in his mind that was filled with so much else.

Lois.

Lois here.

What she’d left behind in Metropolis.

Oh boy.

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The man had had Lois’s affection, maybe her love, and he’d used her for his own gain, putting her career in jeopardy in the process.
The fiend! Can we dangle Claude from the roof now?

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Could he eke out another couple of days to add to his memory bank?
He could research?

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The calf had been in a good position when Clark had looked through Bess’s side earlier.
Cute little mention of casual use of powers.

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He couldn’t really be in love with her.

Could he?

He was.

He was sure he was.

And he was sure he always would be.
Awwwwww

Another sweet part! And I gather in the next part the cow comes home?

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