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One chapter to go. There will be a resolution, of sorts, but most of the big questions will be answered in the sequel.

Thanks to everyone who has read, and particularly those who have been so generous with feedback.

Corrina.

Thanks for getting my weekend off to a good start with another terrific chapter! I’m sad there’s only one chapter left but I’m happy there will be a sequel which answers the big questions.

It’s going to be interesting to see if Lois eventually becomes a farm girl or if Clark becomes an ex farm boy. For the later to happen, he would need to ensure that the farm and Martha are taken care of. Maybe Jack? I can’t think of the character’s name, but the man from the Smallville Press who’s trying to get Clark to work for him, I wonder if the Smallville Press somehow plays a part in the resolution. I’ll just have to be patient and see how everything plays out.

Thanks for a great story! I can’t wait for more!

I liked Clark's inner monologue here, how he struggles with not using his powers when he knows it would make such a huge difference. I wonder what would have to happen for him to work up the courage to tell her

Hooray for another chapter! I love the feeling you’re building up of a storm coming: Jack is finally here pushing Lois to make decisions, Clark is struggling with what he knows he can do but maybe shouldn’t (or should), Martha is reckoning with the future, rain is coming…

I can’t wait for the next chapter! And I’m so glad there will be a sequel. I’ve been loving your writing.

Oh good, a sequel! I was wondering how you were going to wrap things up in one more chapter. Now we have more to look forward too.

Love all the little moments between Lois and Clark. They need to just admit how they feel about each other. Their worries about living in seperate places are understandable but sometimes I just want to shake them and tell them to talk it out and find a way to make it work.

Looking forward to seeing more of Jack. Hppe they get all the hay in

An upcoming sequel? Terrific! There's still so much more to unpack in this story. The mere fact that Jack is her half-brother needs more than one part to get all that finished.

With Jack's help they might get more hay in, but it will be a stretch. In the North Country where my husband grew up that is a huge part of the economy up there. If it rains early that is a major problem.

Martha is right, if Clark uses his powers to completely bring the hay in it will be noticed. Chit chat about the neighbors is a huge part of such small communities. Still, he could have brought in another fifty bales under the cover of night...

Next part will be up soon?

Sorry for the late commenting - have been on vacation and now have quite a backlog of fic stuff to go through.

Seems like Clakr is getting more and more frustrated with Martha's fear-driven attitude reg. the use of his powers. Lois may or may not have had an influence there. I sense this conflicts is close to reach its boiling point sooner or later.
Well, at least Lois got brownie points with Martha for "helping" Clark to solve the Lana situation, so there's that. But wow, this version of MArtha has...fear issues. A lot of them. A lot more than canon Martha seems to have. I wonder if there's more to it than "just" Jonathan's death, like something that happened in the past of this world that serves as a reason for that super-paranoia.
Ultimately, they're all saved from the Hay Issue...by someone mos tunexpected: Jack is back.
Aaand, ding, turns out he is indeed Lois' half-brother. Well that should be..interesting going forward. How will Lois deal with that? WE'll find out soon enough I assume.
There's also more LC fluff, and we have the both of them in the hay together...ah, just talking...for now that is. LOL
I'm seriously a bit irritated how you are going to get this story to an end in just one more chapter. There are so many threads that still have to get resolved...well I assume I have to trust you there? Ah well then.
Looking forward for the grand finale!