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Gee, I would have liked to pull this one as random episode. Really liked this one, the angst and the conflicting emotions here. So well done!

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Thank you! Working on a sequel to it.


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Interesting. Its been a long time since Tim and Amber Lake were mentioned. Collectors indeed. How did they get the Batmobile?


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Hi there!

What a fun read!

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She tried to move but chains fastened her down. They were green and had the acidic stench of kryptonite.
Really visceral!

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The harsh, sterile light above her blinded her. It was all she could focus on to blot out the pain. The pain of losing him. Time and time again. The pain of losing their child.
whinging

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“You should be honored,” his oily gloved hand massaged her swollen stomach. “The alien hybrid you carry is humans’ salvation. Your sacrifice will be remembered.”
This really sounds like Lex!

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It was just a nightmare.
Based on the title, I know that this is an 'out of the frying pan, into the fire,' situation, but I'm still glad that was just a dream!

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A sleek black car –she hadn’t seen in years–was parked in the center of the room.
Ooo! Intriguing that she's seen it before - has she had an interaction with Bats?

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“I can take you with me when I go,” she glared at Amber, showing her she meant business.
Awesome! lol

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If she died it would allow Clark to move on –settle down with a being like him, who could carry on the legacy of Krypton. He could be the father he was always meant to be. Without her.
So interesting to see this from Lois' perspective. It reminds me of the episodes where Clark tries to leave her for her own good.

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She had ten minutes to form an escape plan.
I love that this is her interpretation of what they said!

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The tears she had held at bay for months poured out at full force. “Smallville,” she whispered.
Awww.

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His eyes bore into her and she forgot their situation for a second.
This is so poignantly sad.

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Her knees gave out and she collapsed onto the cot. Her lips were cold and chapped. She didn’t want to go on living.
You can really feel this.

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“You keep saying that, but I don’t love her,” Clark’s jaw worked in frustration. “I love you.”
Poor guy, lol.

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“I missed that,” Clark said seriously. “I haven’t seen you smile in a while.”
That's pretty heartbreaking.


This really pulled at the heartstrings!

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So happy you are posting here now!

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Thank you for your feedback! Made my day 😊 Stay tuned for a part 2!!


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Hi CalliopeWayne!

So great to see you posting on the message boards, too smile1

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Cold metal dug into Lois’ spine.
Gun?

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She tried to move but chains fastened her down.
Tied up in a story?

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They were green and had the acidic stench of kryptonite.
Definitely not a kinky one.

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She craned her neck, inwardly recoiling when she saw Clark suspended in a glass chamber. His dead eyes stared at her through the green liquid entombing him.
Eeep!


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A sharp pain pricked her stomach. Her cries morphed into screams as blood was drawn out of her womb. “No, please don’t take my baby!”
Eeeeeeep!

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“Subject 11 is stable. Prepare for extraction,”
Subject 11?

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Lois woke with a splitting headache, her mouth tasting like blood.
Dream? How did she get to that dream? She’s not been hanging out with her father-in-law, has she?

“Good morning,” Her husband brushed a kiss on her lips.
“Mornin’, Jax,” Lois replied drowsily.

peep

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She stood on a platform a little bigger than a twin bed.
Oh…

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Inside a glass case was ancient, gold goblet.
/Points at Indiana Jones/ Let’s not tell him and hope he doesn’t drink from it.

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“Talk about an explosive romance,” she smiled icily. “Your love life is about to go up in smoke.”
Cute!

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“You’re reckless, not suicidal.”
He never read the background column of her stories, did he?
LOIS: That’s called being adventurous.

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She ripped Superman’s heart out and crushed it. Clark couldn’t be near Lois without that self-loathing expression darkening his features. He thought she hated him because of what Darkseid made him do. The rest of the world might hate Kal-El, but Lois Lane never could. The lies she let him swallow were kinder than the truth.
Umm…?

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Amber Lake rushed to the edge of the platform. “Get back!” she screamed. Lois met Golilocks anger with a challenging smile.

“Mrs. Lane, Step away from the barrier,” Tim Lake said, still eerily composed and calm.
Looks there, she’s testing the conviction of her cage

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You’re the honey, honey,” Amanda smirked. “Superman is the bee.”
Good thing they didn’t use Mayson.

MAYSON: Did the reader just call me vinegar?

huh

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“Superman doesn’t care about me–I’m just a reporter to him.”
Riiiiight.

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“He’s a human being,” Lois argued. “You can’t keep him locked up like some animal in a zoo!”
He’s an alien menace.

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That’s exactly what he is,” Tim said. “An alien specimen that belongs in a museum,”
See?

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Oh. What’s the point? All of Batman’s toys were voice activated –
Wouldn’t it be awkward if Clark had the voiceprint, too

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“We did it!” Amber embraced her husband gleefully. “The Kryptonian is ours!”
Makes you wonder, if they keep him there until the other New Kryptonians show up and release him because he’s no longer a collector’s item.

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Yes!” Finally the lunkhead was understanding her. “You belong with Wonder Woman.”
Funny how that’s what Clark probably calls her in his head.

Tons of emotions! I think I’m missing a prequel, though dizzy

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