Just dropping in quickly to respond to one point - I'll let my co-author respond to the thread as a whole in due course.
SJH said, and what an image!
After That kiss, how can she not know she'd stepped in the same river twice?
ROFL!
So I don't see that this kiss would be any different. Although... since I don't intend to give any of our plot away, I'll just add that who knows? My partner's evil enough to do just about anything.
Thank you all for your wonderful comments so far! Kae and I have been reading them and doing

with delight.
Wendy
