Er... Excuse me to stop by in the middle of this debate and send some quick feedback on this.
First off, I am really enjoying it. The scenario here is totally original and not out of character.
I am really amazed that people think that this cant work. It works so well, that the girls are posting it and people are here debating and sending their feedback. If it wasn't working, the readers would simply do not stop by and waste their time sending their FDK.
I am also confused when people say Lois and Clark should behave like this and that. Guys, you want something original or you want it to be predictable and waffy all the time? The way it is now, it seems that no matter how much we work on our plots, the stories "have" to be the way readers want and predict. Let's not forget that even if the story looks weird to our opinions, writers are free to play with the characters as they please and for the reader there's only the choice to follow the story or not.
Personally, I think I prefer reading the original plots nowadays than the predictable ones. After ten years of show... although we just love them, they tend to get boring.
MDL.
(who's really going to hide now and hope she made some sense out her speech despite her miserable English.)
