How do you write every part so much better than the last? notworthy

Too many awesome things to point out. Loved Silas' reaction to the news. Loved Lois' introspection...dead on and soo wonderful, truly worth the wait (and I can see why you did it). Silas finally seeing that Clark = Superman and wondering how he ever could have missed it. All just sloppy

And Tempus as Utopia's bogeyman..so totally believable.

~Liz


Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.