Hi, I'm new, but I wanted to take a minute to let you know how much I am enjoying this story.
Some thoughts on Tempus/John Kent:
According to the soulmates explanation, souls cannot be created or destroyed: everyone who exists in Utopia will exist, Tempus is just trying to change the circumstances of their existence. What he's doing really isn't going to make him cease to exist; but it will change his geneology and his history.
I'm wondering if the reason the soultracker can't detect Lois & Clark at this time is because Tempus has hidden them in a time when their souls are already present? (Silas & ?)
I'm expecting that the Silas-Elise-Elise's husband connection will be the key to the Peacekeepers finally locating Lois & Clark.
I'd like to see Silas meet his soulmate before they go: Petal maybe?
I'm pleading with you not to take away all of their memories at the end of this story. I really hated the throw-away ending for Tempus Fugitive.
And I really don't want to have this story interrupted at all; but, if it's absolutely necessary, I'm willing to trust the author's judgment regarding whether this is a better stopping place than the end of chapter 12. I'd rather stop and rest here than be left dangling off a cliffhanger like some of those we've seen at the end of previous chapters.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us, and ditto all of the wonderful feedback you have received from everyone else.
