Wendy
Awwww, wonderfully sweet and WAFFY story!
I liked Lucy's role and how you described Lois reaction to her sister's observations.
You portrayed Lois sooo accurately! It was like seeing it on TV. I could really see here before me, acting and reacting!
Nice relevations scene, too!
All in all:
Erin
Happy, happy, happy Birthday!
~Sira
