Okay, I stored up a few chapters worth of comments for one go.

Chapter 7

Who’s the woman?? Is it Lois?? So glad I don't have to wait to find out!

Chapter 8

Did not see that coming.

Chapter 9

Ooh, interesting interaction between Lois and Clark (for the first time I don’t like his name… its dirty in this story)

Chapter 10

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Perhaps I’ve poked this bear once too many times, he thought to himself.
Hahahaha

Aww, poor Clark.

Chapter 11

Securitized? Did you mean scrutinize? This is the second time I've seen it. Pretty sure securitize is some financial term.

Finally, some change in Clark (still with the dirty name)

Chapter 12

I really like how none of this has been from Lois’s POV. But its still kind of obvious what must be going through her head. It would ruin it somehow (hope its not coming... yet at least)

Okay back to reading (see, this is why I waited till it was all posted grin )

"Oh my gosh! Authors really do use particular words on purpose!" ~Me, when I started writing a book.