Oh, DJ, I thought at first you were going to make Lana's death all a bad dream. All I could think was... Oh, no!! Not another 'Dallas'. I'm glad that her sitting on the bed was a nightmare.
I agree! Please don't remove the little nfic romp. And then, too, he wakes up in Lois' bed. So that seems to say to me that they still had sex. Why did he wake up in Lois' bed? You are leaving it, aren't you?
It did seem the one section just before the nightmare just kind of suddenly got cut off. I was left shaking my head a little. Did I miss something? I am pretty tired right now.
Okay, now remind me of how Lois found out about Superman in New Beginnings. I'd say I'd re-read the story, and I will eventually, but right now, I'm stretched thin....
Glad you are writing another one.
