Yes, thanks, that did it.
Did I tell you how wonderfully real that Lana scene was? No wonder I thought at first her death might have been a dream. I was biting my fingernails that entire time (or as close as I ever come to 'biting' them).
More!! I want more! {But please do help Sue finish with Faustian first!}
Edit: Oh, my gosh, it's posted! Does that mean Sue has your story now?