I ignored this fic when it first came out due mostly to my belief that Lois and Clark would never sleep together unless they were in a committed relationship. I've never seen either of them as the 'recreational sex' type.
Recently I desided to give the story a try. It had been completed so I could do it in a few sittings.
While I still don't buy into the main premise, and I found that some of the 'problems' they kept having seemed less logical extensions of the situations and more designed to just crank up the angst, I have to admit that I enjoyed the read.
This story was very well-written. And despite the character ticks that might not have dovetailed with my personal vision I felt compelled to continue reading.
There was a continual need to see 'what happens next'. It wasn't quite the 'can't turn away from watching the train wreck' sort of situation, but I felt I had to stay onboard to see how this would eventually work out. (We never have to wonder where the story will end up... that's a given).
A very strong narrative which lost none of its power in the conversion to pgfic. Well done.
Tank (who doesn't read nfic because he gets no thrill out of reading, or watching someone else having sex)
