Carol,
I had the day off on Friday so I finally got a chance to read through all 53 chapters! Boy, have you kept me busy.
I was having trouble understanding Clark's motivations for marrying Lois and staying with her until reading the back story with Chris. Now, the pieces of the puzzle are starting to fit.
Although Lois knows now, she seems to be withdrawing to herself. I hope the pep talks with Jonathan and Martha will help bring these two together. Right now, the chasm between the two of them seems huge.
It might be too far off from where they are now, but I'd love to see Lois and Clark explore how their going to manage raising a baby and attend college. Aside from money, this Lois doesn't seem to be a workaholic, but I imagine she's career driven. A pregnancy so young could derail her plans completely.
Are you going to make us wait till the very end for you to confirm that Clark is indeed the father? If so, that's just cruel.
Can't wait till Tuesday.
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