wow.... the ending to these parts was amazingly emotional.
Seeing Lois trying desperately to deal with all this... the strength she is using just to stay in the right space...
I think she is getting benefit from having talked to Clark's parents, but Martha is right... Lois isn't dwelling on Clark being an alien or what he can do... she needs something from Clark... and he is avoiding her. I was hoping after Martha chatted to him, Clark might have got something into that thick head of his that he needed to get closer to Lois (and I'm not talking in the physical sense)... but more of those one on one chats... Lois needs to tell Clark what she is going through with this baby just as much as Clark needed to tell her he was an alien...
I loved these parts. There are a lot of underlying emotions and feelings that are being exposed and explored, and it really is a rough ride, but you've written it so well. It's almost intoxicating.
I can not wait to read more!
