Wonderful part 1, Kaethel!
I love it!
And I'm glad you finally posted.
I like how you're using Claude. First having Clark reconize him instantly, while he never even met the guy. Then the whole conversation with Lois... great! The way he changes everything she sais to turn the events in his advantage
And then he notices how Clark feels. Poor Lois! /me feels the need to use her 2x4 on Claude, maybe that would help
There's only one thing missing...
Where is part 2????? Come on, you can't let me hanging here till Saturday! Please post more right now?
Saskia