Kae, nice little beginning.
We all knew it was Claude and it was fun to see his and Lois' conversation. Lois' confused emotions were very well done. I like how Claude's version of things seemed so logical from his point of view. I half expected him to tell Lois she should thank him for helping to make her the great reporter that she is now.
Since I've finished this part you can post the next one.
Tank (who figures he can give Kae until tomorrow to post the next part since he won't be able to read it until then... wait, he has to work late tomorrow, okay, tuesday then)
