Okay, I've just read this over in nfic - and I agree; this would have to be edited for PG13. Lynn, I hope you will send this version of the story to Annesplace's nfic section!
Wonderful, wonderful scenes! That argument between Lois and Clark had me breathless throughout. I could see the frustrated yearning beneath the surface for both of them - and when it exploded into outright desire I almost forgot to breathe altogether. I could really see Clark losing his temper like that. And you write a scared Lois very well indeed.
Does Clark perhaps have a little secret that he wants to tell her?
Regardless of these points, Lynn, I have
loved this story and it's going on my Kerth list!
Wendy
