Part two lived up to the promise of part one. Well done! I especially liked your angle on Lois liking Superman:
Assuming that he is the criminal that you say, do you think I’d be more likely to be attracted to him if he had your abilities?”
“No,” Clark answered simply.
“Exactly,” Lois replied. “It’s not about the super powers. It’s about what you do with them.
I also enjoyed your twist on Clark's floating:
Right here, right now, neither time, nor space, nor gravity had any hold on two people at the cusp of love.
Joy,
Lynn
