Iolanthe: You said:
I considered dedicating the kiss at the end to you. I'm afraid that I can only dedicate a kiss to Beverly.
Aww! That's sweet! And it's what we chicks like to hear.
bellarata: You said:
Wow I just loved this ! Loved how you dealt with Lois figuring out the secret. Very realistic and well done!!
Seriously, thank you SO much. If you look at my comments above, you can see that I have been fearful that this didn't work as well as I hoped. I'm really glad you enjoyed the story.
Bob