Wow what a chapter! I agree with all else said here. First letr me say I was SO HAPPY TO SEE THIS TODAY!!!! I was doing cartwheels! Well not literally just mentally. Thanks for the fix.
The date was perfect. Your reasons for no kiss were of course legitimate. I am glad she did the shoulder snuggle and the hug and told him she liked him. Sigh...
Moyne's Uncle! Fantastic, now we know he knows Moyne is the killer. But you eveil little thing you! This can go either in their favor, or badly against! So we have another puzzle to wait for. Since Clark has already been through hell, may I suggest it go in their favor.
I know eventually he gets out, but can we have the Uncle just make things disappear without hurting Clark more. Just a suggestion. I am with you either way.
This could be a really good out for them and a way back to legal civilization. He could say I will let you out all past records destroyed if you promise not to report it or cause trouble. No one will know and you will get your parents back. It will be as if it never happened.Wouldn't that be as lovely an end for the whole deal as could be possible!
Well unless you take the easy way out and have HG Wells interfere and make the last 7 years go away, but I don't advise that at this point in the story telling. We are too riveted to this story as is.
I think this is one of the longest feedback I have ever given! Laura
