Real Life has been very busy, and I've had to catch up on a few chapters! I enjoy the POV you allow us with each main character that is involved. I am currently reading a series where there is no straight "bad guy" and "good guy." You are understanding of each character's feelings and motives, and it is just so wonderful to real life. We are all layered invidividuals. We ourselves aren't defined by only one kind of motive or feeling.
That is exactly what you are doing in your story, and I really, really enjoy that. Moyne seems to be the only real creep here.
