I guess this was well-written from a certain point of view. Some of these stories should have warning labels on them, labeling them "chick fics".
Guys be forewarned that this fic is chock full of gawking at male chests and so forth and so on, something we simply can't understand. Now maybe if it was some other intrepid, Kerth-winning reporter we may be able to particip...er...appreciate it better. <g>
I, never being one to interfere with or to offer suggestions to someone else's Mary Sue story, wonder if I should hold out hope that Clark's wife/girlfriend/best friend may walk in on him ravishing Mary Sue and her roommates, making her available for others.
Of course, I would never write a Mary Sue/Gary Stu story myself, preferring to keep my fantas...er...private story ideas to myself, but I do hear that Lex may be available for Lois.
